mashvaraa-subodh laal saaqi

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مشورہ  ۔  سبودھ  لعل  ساقیؔ

۱

ہے  پرماتما!

صدیوں  پہلے

جب  سے  تجھے  ایجاد  کیا  ہے

تب  سے  ہے  تو  ڈیوٹی  پر

۲

تھکا  تھکا  سا  لگتا  ہے

اب  ایسا  کر

کچھ  دن  کی  تُو  چھٹی  لے  لے

۳

بچّے  تیرے  بڑے  ہو  گئے

ان  کو  کر  دے  خود  مختار

کیسے  چلے  گا  تیرے  بنا  بھی  یہ  سنسار

یہ  بھی  تجربہ  ہونے  دے

۴

لا  اپنی  چھٹی  کی  عرضی  مجھ  کو  دے

मशवरा – सबोध लाल साक़ी
१
है परमात्मा!
सदियों पहले
जब से तुझे ईजाद किया है
तब से है तू ड्यूटी पर

२
थका थका सा लगता है
अब ऐसा कर
कुछ दिन की तू छुट्टी ले ले

३
बच्चे तेरे बढे हो गए
उनको कर दे ख़ुद मुख़्तार
कैसे चलेगा तेरे बिना भी ये संसार
ये भी तज्रुबा होने दे

४
ला अपनी छुट्टी की अर्ज़ी मुझको दे

 

Click here for background and on any passage for word meanings and explanatory discussion. subodh lal saaqi (xxxx-xxxx) direct descendant of hargopal tufta. His father vinod lal taalib was also a shaa’er and his mother a scholar of hindi and sanskrit. Both his older and younger brother are published shu’ara. His father and then aalam fatehpuri were his ustaad. Worked as a high-level officer in the government and later as President of ZTV. His collection was published in 2016.
1
hey parmaatma1!
sadiyoN2 pahle
jab se tujhe iijaad3 kiya hai
tab se hai tu DuTy4 par   
1.primary soul, god 2.centuries ago 3.invented 4.work
O primary soul, ever since, ages ago, we invented you, you have been constantly working.

2
thaka1 thaka sa lagtaa hai
ab aisaa kar
kuchh din ki tu chhuTTi le le    
1.tired
You look tired. Now do this. For a few days, you take a holiday.

3
bachche tere baR’e ho gaye
unko kar de Khud-muKhtaar1
kaise chalega ter’e binaa2 bhi yeh sansaar3
yeh bhi tajruba4 hone de   
1.self-reliant, control of onself 2.without 3.world 4.experiment
Your children are now grown up. Let them make their own decisions. How can this world function without you … let this experiment also be carried out.

4
laa apni chhuTTi1 ki arzii2 mujhko de    1.holiday 2.application
Come, give me your application for leave.

subodh lal saaqi (xxxx-xxxx) direct descendant of hargopal tufta.  His father vinod lal taalib was also a shaa’er and his mother a scholar of hindi and sanskrit.  Both his older and younger brother are published shu’ara.  His father and then aalam fatehpuri were his ustaad.  Worked as a high-level officer in the government and later as President of ZTV.  His collection was published in 2016.
1
hey parmaatma1!
sadiyoN2 pahle
jab se tujhe iijaad3 kiya hai
tab se hai tu DuTy4 par

1.primary soul, god 2.centuries ago 3.invented 4.work

O primary soul, ever since, ages ago, we invented you, you have been constantly working.
2
thaka1 thaka sa lagtaa hai
ab aisaa kar
kuchh din ki tu chhuTTi le le

1.tired

You look tired.  Now do this.  For a few days, you take a holiday.
3
bachche tere baR’e ho gaye
unko kar de Khud-muKhtaar1
kaise chalega ter’e binaa2 bhi yeh sansaar3
yeh bhi tajruba4 hone de

1.self-reliant, control of onself 2.without 3.world 4.experiment

Your children are now grown up.  Let them make their own decisions.  How can this world function without you … let this experiment also be carried out.
4
laa apni chhuTTi1 ki arzii2 mujhko de

1.holiday 2.application

Come, give me your application for leave.